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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Sexual Hiaku

Not easy to do...

Jennifer CJennifer Cabout 19 years ago
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Short but very sweet

Hot little poem!

Great

~ J

matriarchmatriarchabout 19 years ago
perfectly

describes the effect of your words. xx

Honey123Honey123about 19 years ago
sexy

little poem....very nice

~honey

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
So much passion...

expressed here, in just one small breath.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
haiku rotic

tiny breath

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