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Ashesh9almost 11 years agoMein Gott en Himmel !!
You're spoutin' pure Aryan lingo , these days 1201 !!
Angelineover 10 years agoI don't like the note in the middle of the poem or the separation
of what I read as a coda to a sonnet. I think it's a wonderful sonnet. The coda I like less but then I've never cared for Wagner either. But obviously it's a 5. The sonnet really is great. You should read Ted Berrigan's sonnets if you haven't yet.
twelveooneover 10 years agoAuthorSurely Ash
you must have heard of Mary Shelley, not stolen from, but rather rewritten, and I'm glad to see you quickly reverted to comments of no substance.
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