All Comments on 'Broken Thoughts Entranced Soul'

another story done in words that promotes vivid pics..

j.b

with word and images but you have totally obscured what you were trying to say , if you had something to say. just because it sounds interesting, it doesnt mean its good poetry. and just because its obscure doesnt mean its a good poem. what was your point. what were you trying to say?

I like "ruddy girth of your Soul", it has a nice bite.

leave a little room for addendums. TK U MLJ LV NV