by My Erotic Tail
This is one of your better poems.
"Riding live leather" is a very good line.
You might want to even some of the lines a bit,
and I hope you will forgive me,
but "hopeing" has no "e". ;)
...this is supposed to be non-erotic?!?!?! maybe I just have a dirty mind~~~ *laughs*
I felt like I was there watching. thanks for the show.
Art ~
Nice one you've done here
And you've even got a YDD comment
That defies all the descriptions I'd always heard about her. Well crafted piece in your traditional Texas style.