All Comments on 'But A Dream'

by lil_fire

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SeattleRainSeattleRainalmost 20 years ago
dream and

keep dreamin' lil fire it's a comin' round the mountain! it might be in disguise :)

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
1st times the hardest..

after that then you atleast know you really do survive! keep dreamin doll, still way too much ahead of you.

times your friend, let it mend what's broken!

tungtied2utungtied2ualmost 20 years ago
Writing from pain

is difficult. This is very moving, and could be more so if trimmed of some articles and put in the present tense. Keep burnin' lil flame. Thanks for sharing.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Wishes and dreams

Are not the only place where

Hugs become real...

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