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by wakingDown

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todski28todski28over 10 years ago
Was wondering where you went

consistently powerful writing, you capture the paranoia of thought well in this piece,

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

Paranoia is an old friend of mine as well. Often hard to judge what others are thinking when our thoughts are so tainted with ourselves.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
What if

The world conspirin' just beyond my senses

Past the bare edge of my strainin' mind ......

Persecution complex or plain dementia has plagued mankind for centuries here etched out in painfully sharp detail : 5-ed

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