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Full of sound and image,

furiously signifying. . . ?

This poem contains some wonderful writing,

but seems sectioned and with the weakness

of no strong inner thread to tie it together

in a more obvious unity of work.

button says we need another category of poetry on literotica.com

"called for muffled cries injected into bare arm

self hickey breath around"

god I love this line.

Sveltwalker, you are a naughty girl, I think there is a club...

Okay Peter, not one of your strongest

At least so it seems to me;

Feels more like stream of consciousness

With myriad random thoughts

Bumping up against each other.