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Go for that magical elixir and let someone else drink the damn tea.

Go for that magical elixir and let someone else drink the damn tea.

My comments on your poem are on the new poems thread in the poetry forum. I did not use the thermometer for rating.

There are so many good lines in this poem and some great alliteration. It reads well aloud and deserves several go-throughs. Good 'un Eummie!

:Note: I no longer use the thermometer.

It kills me that for

Time that shall go uncounted

I sipped from cups of sweet tea

When I?m a sporadic coffee bean queen

Who rests her laurels on pads of paper

Wet with scrawls of ink

that last line especially just seems to define you at that moment. wonderful smooth read that is contemplative and determined. I enjoyed this very much :)