by Belegon
I really liked the artist's implementation of the body as a tool of art. Very nice poem.
This is great, I really like the image you 'paint'. Turpentine tongue~ it's open to interpretation, making the third read as enjoyable as the first two.Thanks
I was especially fond of the alliteration in this one. "Bristles/brush; strokes/swirls; failing/find; turpentine/tongue." I like poems that play subtle games with the lips and tongue. Nicely done. The imagery the peom creates is clear and the tone is very evocative of wistfulness tempered by distance.