All Comments on 'Carnivale'

Good poem. The parts in italics seemed almost haunting. I could hear them being whispered on the wind.

Vigorous words creating strong phrases,

but I find your title misleading.

Still, you create and engaging read as you most often do.

I agree about the italicized phreaes

almost as though that were a record on in the background or a song stuck in your head while you were going through this.

nice images also

Thank you

I like the thoughts-within-thoughts, they add the icing in between....nicely done.

~Merry

Set upon at the family gathering, you need your wits about you.

a carnival or the worlds fair, TK U MLJ LV NV