- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Carthage
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There was a time I loved you.
It was yesterday, about ten o’clock.
You called me from your office
And asked what I wanted for dinner.
Now it’s dark, and I’m waiting for you to be gone to bed
Long enough for me to slip past you into the spare room.
- COMMENTS
Under_Sunabout 17 years agooh my god, thanks Lebroz for bringing this up, what a powerful piece, love it hate it LOVE it.
Tzaraabout 17 years agoAnd the title makes the whole thing work--gives it depth, if I have interpreted it correctly. Well done.
LeBrozabout 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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Anonymousabout 18 years agoWonderful and sad how a few simple words can evoke so much.
Lovely.
Harry Leg
angelicminxabout 19 years agoWhen was it that you invaded my head, my home and my life? Well done. Hugs and kisses babe... so sad! ~Minx
