All Comments on 'carving a poem'

on a bell curve, not my favourite subject matter, but consistent.

.....from me too. Anyone who's tried to write good poetry knows the feeling of doubt as it takes shape, "vision after vision after revision". Nice.

Tess

Superb one of my favourites of yours

Five.

you brought to us with this and your summation at the end makes this well worth reading. i really like that hopeful, joyous tone at the end!

down through several generations, TK U MLJ LV NV