catch of the day

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a heart with a hundred hooks
embedded in bleeding flesh
like mullet sliced and used as bait
that heart attracts the fishermen

a hundred, a thousand, more
that heart riddled with rusted hooks
thrown back again and again
bait for a fisherman, bored

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE TRICK THEN

is to change the bait or choose another species, TK U MLJ LV NV

fridayamfridayamover 13 years ago
Such a dark

and unforgiving poem

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Reads

like a stick of dynamite attached to a hook, once reeled in , it goes with a bang

sad, such moving words

love ya

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
merry christmas

I like to fish... but couldn't catch the meaning of your cast. (~_~) but I did flash back to when I was a boy and caught mullet to sell to the bait shops ... 10 mullet for 50 cents <grin...(however... ribbon fish were 10 for a dollar) have a good day!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Read it a few times and I'm leaning along with Eve's idea about the second instance of "that heart." Maybe even "a heart," although that's stretching it a bit.

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