All Comments on 'Catching Your Eye'

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YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Clothed in lust

"For I came fully clothed in lust" - a good line

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Enjoyment

First lines only

Second lines only

Poems within a poem

Nicely done

Thank you

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A goodly piece where she knows exactly the scene she creaates to further her fulfilling her own desires.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
DEFY THEM YES

DENY THEM NO tk u mlj lv nv

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