by MinorMonster
Easy to relate when starting winter
Already missing summer's exhilaration;
It's not just lack of sun that
Makes the season depressing.
Good contrast.
A beautifully conceived metaphor, told with lovely images. Mentioned in today's new poem reviews
brings the images , wastes nothing...easy to read , no breaks...wavy piece of nature ...blue
changing plaices (my play on words)
I cannot see to agree with the other comments, looks like a bit of a word jerk for you had a whale of a time.
Don't misunderstand me it is good, just not good enuff for the LOVED IT
and how come I don't see any comments from you over here?