All Comments on 'Chance Meeting'

brings multitude of various ages and cultures. TK U MLJ LV NV

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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A couple acting like a pair of CIA operatives and all for an evening quickie...

A couple acting like a pair of CIA operatives and all for an evening quickie...

This poem is mentioned in the New Poems thread on the bulletin board

the first 4 lines are a poem in themselves. I think you lose your focus a little towards the end, or maybe you reworked it so much you didnt know how to finish, I think you have the start of an excellent poem here, you just need to freshen it up in the last 2 verses :)