All Comments on 'Change'

This poem lacks description. True, you make a lot of statements. But they fall flat as a poem. Show us something-- make us feel something-- describe something.

Otherwise, what you've got is just a list of statements.

Xtaabay

Sounds like a never ending annoying whining, more appropriate to a 6 year old than to an adult.

Sounds like a never ending annoying whining, more appropriate to a 6 year old than to an adult.