All Comments on 'Cherry Burns'

Your poem has been mentioned on the new poems thread on Literotica's poetry forum.

I liked much each part but together I felt that there were a bit too many semantic fields involved: dreams; trees; stains then carpet. At the end I liked the ambiguity of dreams which are hidden under the carpet (but not fully removed). Actually what a nice theme to write about - typology of dreams

Compelling little piece. So short you may be tempted to dismiss it or read it so fast it's done before you comprehend it. Take your time and savor these words.