All Comments on 'Chrysalis'

Damn you, you made it very difficult to top lines like these:

"like some sickly sweet fragrance:

flowers just beginning to rot

in the simply too hot sun."

they sing with a very reekiness

of cliche, yet touch it not

it is a shame, we don't have a character that suggests a small pause - consider this:

of the simply too hot * sun

with great images. agree with 1201.......don

gorgeous, captured that time perfectly- the just starting to rot bit-- put me right at my grandmother's peony bush. instantly~as

And the birth of something special...

And the birth of something special...