All Comments on 'Clarissa again'

by skip.69

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everrandyeverrandyover 19 years ago
You, too?

You, too, seem to know Clarissa. She must be lucky to have someone like you lusting so much after her.

CrapolaCrapolaover 19 years ago
Slimy and sick!

And I absolutely LOVED it! I'll bet Clarissa did, too.

postobitumpostobitumover 19 years ago
Really

liked the visuals here, the images, I just didn't like the repititions. I think you could trim some of those out if not most and it could really up the intensity of the piece. For example:

"I want to see her from the front,

her wet gaping cunt.

See if she’s got a beauty mole,

appreciate her bottom hole.

See her every way,

every day.

See her hard little clit,

where my mouth would leave its spit."

I could be off base here, but that's just how I see it. Nothing but love, like I said I enjoy the visuals (esp of the spitty clit, lol) :)

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