by skip.69
You, too, seem to know Clarissa. She must be lucky to have someone like you lusting so much after her.
liked the visuals here, the images, I just didn't like the repititions. I think you could trim some of those out if not most and it could really up the intensity of the piece. For example:
"I want to see her from the front,
her wet gaping cunt.
See if she’s got a beauty mole,
appreciate her bottom hole.
See her every way,
every day.
See her hard little clit,
where my mouth would leave its spit."
I could be off base here, but that's just how I see it. Nothing but love, like I said I enjoy the visuals (esp of the spitty clit, lol) :)