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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
I love this...

...sweet little verse. It conjures up so many images and leaves us wanting more. Five

jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
some wonderful phrasing

in this unique poem. An intriguing climb indeed. Very good.

jim : )

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Following her up the mountain always left me breathless and heavy and saying Yes before I knew what I said Yes to!

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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