All Comments on 'Close Your Eyes'

and some good lines.

keep reading and writing and you'll find your voice

: )

Thank you

with only a few breaks in the rhythm here. The rhyme, though fairly simple, is subtle and works well. The metaphor of wings was nice and I would like to have seen it developed more in the poem with some added imagery. I think if you work some on presenting some concrete images to show the reader what you are saying instead of just telling them, the poem would really shine. Some nice work here, very good.

jim : )

I like the meter and I am a fan of rhyme. You did a lovely job of expressing your feelings here. Keep writing!

Dreams, dreamers and all they promise. Nicely done piece made softly romantic by its rhythm & rhyme structure.