by Wanton Vixxxen
I was held captive with this enchanting and highly erotic poem, this series has multi levels of stories in an excellent poetic write and this addition is Paramount in a gripping poem about a rock star and his fans lustful apetite. <grin> I am enjoying this series and look forward to more!
mentioned >> on the new poems reviews >
Wow.... Wow. Upbeat... flows fast... keeps up with the feel of the rock concert. I love it, that's all there is to say.
is what this stage of the cml has put forth. It's a steamer right from the get go. I'm feeling the musician's back stage of good-n-plenty vibes. I wonder though, what will the mood of the next piece entail after this monster bathing ballad!!......super mover and shaker......don
to the days when I'd salivate over pure sex singing while clad in sweat and leather! You never fail to amaze me with your talent. The fluidity of eroticism just courses though your being and it shows.! WELL DONE!
~Ash
reached in your usual masterful imagery... which is without a doubt the thing I find most impressive about your style. This one has become an immediate favorite. You have perfectly captured the rock god image, the feelings surrounding it, the ideas, the enchantment, the romance, the sex, and the moment itself, still unique to your style, but even closer to the feeling of opening a door and being a part of the scene, as the reader, than what's already normal for you.
Another A+, I loved it.
Vividly evocative of the rock scene; this is eros riven with a hard-edged sound. Well, I finally got to your 3 CML's and though a "hard" read, well worth firing up the heart of the cortex.
This is livin large!! It's long, loud & hard---the scene, that is. And your poem makes it all seem so real.
Now this one strikes close to home. Ain't sayin' how many concerts I've been to and what I did but ... I'm glad I did it while I could cause I'm too old to get that wild now ... not that I don't get wild now, just not that wild!!! :-) Terrie
Here's some lovin' with a hard rockin' beat -- some hard poundin' with a backstage pass..........