- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Cockney Blitz
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'itler bombed us 'ere in 'ackney
'e made a right ol' muck
wiv buildins crashin' all arownd
Eastend filled uppa muck.
Them craters where me ol' haarse stood
fair made me ol' ma bawl,
we 'eard 'e dint just pick on us
owwww 'e bombed the King an all!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 13 years agothat anonymous got here before me! and you MASTER poetesses in the forum thought there was only one ! ROFLMFAO idjits!!! can't leave 2 anon comments from the same IP, so I guess you'll be whinging all day
Anonymousabout 13 years agoThis is about as creative as a Richard the Third. Middle class, patronising rubbish penned by a merchant banker.
fridayamabout 13 years agoif you lost the 'ol in line 5 it would make the rhythm better:)
"Wiv a ladder and some glasses
you could see to 'ackney Marshes
If it wasn't for the houses inbetween." x
vrosej10about 13 years agoI barely understood a word of this but its a clever language play. Good work.
Angelineabout 13 years agoSolid five. You need a book of these, they're like paintings--they create a strong image and stay with a reader.
