All Comments on 'Cockney Blitz'

but my first thought was: damn, learn engrish gyrl! Okay, gotta get--damn life, but finish later.

init?

one nitpick - using 'muck' twice there feels a little bit of a cheat but i'm damned if i can offer anything to replace it with :D

damn damn damn the first muck should have been 'ruck' grrrrrrrrr

demotic about the demonic

100

Solid five. You need a book of these, they're like paintings--they create a strong image and stay with a reader.

I barely understood a word of this but its a clever language play. Good work.

if you lost the 'ol in line 5 it would make the rhythm better:)

"Wiv a ladder and some glasses

you could see to 'ackney Marshes

If it wasn't for the houses inbetween." x

This is about as creative as a Richard the Third. Middle class, patronising rubbish penned by a merchant banker.

that anonymous got here before me! and you MASTER poetesses in the forum thought there was only one ! ROFLMFAO idjits!!! can't leave 2 anon comments from the same IP, so I guess you'll be whinging all day