All Comments on 'Coffee?'

by moonstormer

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wildsweetonewildsweetoneover 16 years ago
poetry forum

i mentioned this submission in the new poem review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% rating is so that it does not affect future ratings. - wildsweetone

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Each romance is a mystery tale

He sure takes his time to reciprocate. My date was ready at the time to throw me after almost not asking her 'how about you' at the first date (But I did). So is he the lucky guy or does your bar could be raised few notches? But hey, it looks like you both enjoy the same things; he drinking coffee you making it and so on. And the proof is (no not in the coffee) in the good images I found at the end. Enjoy him at least as much as I enjoyed the poem.

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