All Comments on 'Coffee Shop'

I've been in a hundred places like this and your poem had me smelling coffee and donuts and listening to the rustle of daily papers being read

Nice job

nice flow, enjoyed this one, welcome, is this your first here?

the last three lines give a hit in the jaw

it's not about coffee

love that line!! an d I also enjoy going out by myself just so I can watch people and watch other people watching me...very enjoyable poem :)

solo line. Great imagery, even better, it had the word 'coffee' in the write. (my own personal inspiration for poetry.)

An excellent spot to observe all the goings on of humanity on the run; pausing for a moment to enjoy a bit of life's more delicious rewards.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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