All Comments on 'Cold Footsteps'

by Goldie Munro

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ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEabout 19 years ago
I love.....

when people describe anything to do with snow. I also love how you ponder your own footsteps. Very nice indeed.

LadyJeanneLadyJeanneabout 19 years ago
Introspective

and moody, with an enveloping chill throughout. Shivery. Well done. Thanks, LJ.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
imprints in the snow

This is a powerful poem. We are always leaving something of ourselves behind and yet our footprints, whether it is in the snow or making an impact elsewhere, will inevitably melt away....

~Honey

impressiveimpressiveabout 19 years ago
Interesting

I never looked at footprints in quite that way. Thanks for the journey. ~Imp

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Lovely.

Nicely demonstrates the path we all follow throughout the bustle of our busy lives and how the tranquility of nature becomes marked by the evidence of our precipitated and purposeful steps.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Beautiful

Such lovely imagery creates provoking images in the mind. Thanks for the read :D

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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And they too, in awhile, will be obliterated.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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And they too, in awhile, will be obliterated.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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