by logophile
A very well written
piece of erotica.
This was wonderful
loved it!
Thanks,
~ Jenn
Damn! I think I'm going to pass out. Aside from being very hot, this has a great structure and flow. The best I've read in a while. -T.
As usual, I am privileged to read your superb writing! Thanks!
Well done, logo...in a few simple lines, you've captured the essence of love and lust and sex and eroticism and the deep feelings that accompany all that...and it took less words to do that, than for me to write about it! You rock, girl!
A little too many hackneyed phrases and a little too many porn-like images to be truly erotic but quite hot inspite of that. Nice write.