All Comments on 'Concrete Moon'

Excellent stuff. Love the touch of alliteration here and there, love the images. I can feel the way he plays music. Great example of showing and not telling. Thanks for the read!

- in the written word. I love the sounds of this poem. I can hear the tinny clatter of those silver discs and how it carries us away through jazzy blues and bluesy jazz and all that jazz. Mentioned on the review thread in the Poetry Feedback forum.

Great poem title. It's attention-grabbing and revelant to the text, being a line all on its own. I really like this poem. It has a lot of texture and interesting word choices, real character in the poem. Very good, thanks!

A really loud cacophony you've brought to life here.

The wind like a forlorn sax and the mumblings of oblivious onlookers as our strings. I love your music.

And it has all the innovative freshness of true jazz