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Nicely done here,

the way you telegraph exhaustion

as a couple

find strength and solace

in each other...

a man who loves his woman

and his children,

enough to be tired to the bone,

and still giving ..

****very sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet****

I like it Cymry.

Reads a lil like a list, but it is good.

You bring out the passion

... yes I said passion, in this poem.

Work on imagery, not telling.

Then you will OWN us ...

*Smiles*

Good work here and soo dannng sweet ~!!!

More Plez~

working on...and for sounds like a great movie...with a happy ending in store...thats the kind with wet eyes for a soft heart...blue