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by Dale_Arden

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WickedEveWickedEveabout 17 years ago
mentioned in new poems review on the forum

Hi there. :) This is good. Nice, simple, little poem that says so much. Good job.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
How could...

they not like your fresh baked cinnamon cookies. I liked the beginning but I think it slowed towards the end. In my mind the "I know" slowed it down and should have begun the next verse. etc.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Nicely done cute little poem — simple, uncomplicated, direct.

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