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COPPING A SMOKE 770803/TOR
By JCSTREET © 2004
The prairie was open and warm, but
it was night
you came
out of a Lightfoot song
lightly
on foot, light
at my foot
a cigarette to share climbing
smoke tracing
tunnels of air
emptied by our moving limbs
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YDDalmost 20 years agoGordon would be proud
Remarkable imagery
I love the start of the second stanza
"you came
out of a Lightfoot song
lightly
on foot,"
Another very good read
Anonymousalmost 20 years agoLovely..
..and sweet poem. I see the spiralling smoke and the air-displacing limbs.
