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All Comments on 'Copping A Smoke (a prairie poem)'

by JCSTREET

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Lovely..

..and sweet poem. I see the spiralling smoke and the air-displacing limbs.

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Gordon would be proud

Remarkable imagery

I love the start of the second stanza

"you came

out of a Lightfoot song

lightly

on foot,"

Another very good read

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