tagErotic PoetryCorrection No. 4

Correction No. 4

byRebekkaBrown©

I failed to keep a promise to you
I failed to write
I failed
Thus, another Correction
  
I woke up late today
I hadn't slept well
I had bad dreams
Dreams of strangulation
Your email gave the time
"Perhaps a Correction"
Was the message
There was no perhaps about it
I knew I was to receive a Correction

I prepared the toys, the ropes
I lit the candle
I prepared myself
For pain
The wrist cuffs tight
The ankle cuffs tight
I waited
I stood
High heels
Naked
My eyes closed
My hands behind my back
Wishing I had my long hair
To hold onto
For comfort

I heard the door open
And you stepped inside
For a long time
You didn't move
I knew you were watching me
I was nervous
I wanted to turn around
Run to you
Smother you in deep passionate kisses
Beg your forgiveness
But I didn't
I knew I was to be punished

You stepped forward
I heard the floor creak
You paused behind me
I heard your breathing
Breathing soft warm
Close to me
You walked in front of me
Silent

I felt the blindfold
Wrapping around my eyes
Around my nose
I couldn't breathe
Please help
The fabric was covering my nose
Tight
Help
I stood
Waiting

"Unbutton my shirt"
I reached toward your voice
My hand touched your chest
Slowly I unbuttoned your shirt
I enjoyed undressing you
I reached for your hands
Unbuttoning the cuffs
I walked around you
My hand on your shoulders
Guiding me
I reached up
Slid your shirt off your body
I could smell you
I wanted to lean forward
Kiss your back
Please
You took the shirt from my hand
I stood
Feeling alone
Waiting

The yardstick smacked my ass
Hard
I knew you were in control

"What are you feeling"
Afraid
Submissive

"When did you feel submissive"
When I read your message
I knew I would receive a Correction
I stood
Quiet
Waiting

"I'm on the bed
Take my shoes off"
I turned toward you
Bent down
My hand on your leg
Guiding me
I untied your shoe
I took it off
Placed it on the floor
I reached for your other leg
I began to fumble your laces

"Don't mess up"
I concentrated hard
Feeling the laces
Untying the shoe
Placing it next to the other one
I stood
Waiting for your next instruction
You were in control

"Take off my socks"
I bent down
Finding your feet
Taking off your socks
And placing them in your shoes

"Suck my feet"
Oh thank you
I could give you pleasure
Lifting your foot to my mouth
Wet moist
Eagerly sucked your toes
You moaned
I sucked harder
Enjoying the pleasure
I was giving you

"Your mouth is talented"
Oh thank you
I needed to hear your praise

"Take your left hand
Rub your cunt"
I did as requested
Rubbing hard
Sucking your toes

"Stop"
You moved my legs wide open
My cunt exposed
I lifted both feet
Placing your toes in my mouth
Sucking harder
Licking your feet
You moaned

"Lay on the bed
On your back
Your feet hanging off"
I stood
My legs aching
I moved to the bed
Laying down
I heard you move toward my head

"Quid pro quo"
You applied the clothes pins
To my nipples
I moaned
My fists clinched
In pain
You pushed hard
The leather cord
Into my mouth
It hurt
I couldn’t breath
My tongue tangled
My mouth stretched
I struggled

"We're going to do something
We've never done"
I anticipated your move
Nervous
I felt something around my neck
The leather cord
I thought
You were going to strangle me
You tightened it

"Lift your legs"
I raised my legs
I felt your fingers
Sliding down my cunt
Toward my ass
Then
Pain
I immediately knew
A rubber band
Stretched between your fingers
Popping against my skin
Against my cunt
Slowly
Inching
Down my ass
Pain
Intense pain
My legs shaking
How long was I to hold them up
Pain
Stinging
Rubber band
Against the skin

"Let's make it easier for you"
You tied my ankles together
Pulling my legs
Gripping the rope
Tight in my teeth
And began again
Popping my ass
Popping my cunt
With the rubber band

"Which hurts more"
The ass
Yes
The ass
Hurts more

"Nod your head
When you want more"
It hurt
I didn’t want more
I nodded my head
Harder
You pulled the rubber band
Popping my skin
Pain
Grinding my teeth
Against the rope
Breathing fast
I shook my head
No more
Please
It hurt

"Say yes
When you want more"
I didn't want more
It hurt
Yes
You popped me again
Stinging
My asshole
Burning
Yes
Again
Yes
Again
Popping
My skin swelling
In pain
My legs shaking
Pain
You untied my legs
Spread them apart
I hurt

"What are you feeling"
Pain
I feel pain
Stinging pain
Your fingers soothing
Against my cunt
My wet cunt
Wanting you
Coolness
Lube
Stinging
Against the welts
Your finger
In my ass
Oh pleasure

"I haven't had my finger
In your ass
In a long time"
Yes
It felt good
So good
I wanted to hump your hand
But I was afraid
Afraid to move
Afraid you would stop
Two fingers
Deep inside
Popping your knuckles
Pleasure
Oh
Pleasure
I tried to reach your hand
I wanted to touch you
As your fingers
Forced deeper
Inside me

"Squeeze my fingers"
I want your cock inside me
As I squeezed
Please
I want you

"Sit up"
I sat up
You tied my hands
Behind my back
It hurt
My back hurts
I can't lay like that

"We don't want to hurt your back"
As you untied my hands
I gripped the covers
Expecting
Pain

"Spread your legs"
The pain
Instant
On my cunt
The paint stirrer
Pain

"Spread your legs"
I couldn't
It hurt
The pain
Swelling inside
You slapped my cunt
Again
And
Again
Tears
It hurt
I didn't want to cry
It hurt

"Spread your legs"
Stinging
You slapped my inner thighs
Bruising
Pain
Intense
Pain
Breathing fast
Crying
Warmth
Your cock
My mind racing
When did you undress
I didn't hear you
Take off your clothes
Sucking
I tasted your wetness
Soothing
Sucking
Hungrily
Comforting
Devouring you
Deep in my throat
I could smell your sweat
On your balls
Your hand on my shoulder
Pressing hard
My face against your leg
Your cock
On my face
As you slapped my breast
Pain
Pain
Pain

"Do you know why
You are receiving the
Correction"
I could not remember
I was in pain
I hurt

"You promised to do something
Something simple
It's always simple
I don't ask of you
I don't demand of you
Simple"
Yes
It's simple
Your voice
Cut to my soul
The tone

"Write
I asked you to write
I did not tell you how long to write
I just wanted you to write"
I cried
Broken
I cried
I couldn't even beg your forgiveness
I cried

"Why do you not do as I ask
Why do you not do something that gives me pleasure
Why do you not do something that gives you pleasure"
I couldn't speak
My excuses wouldn't be good enough for you
They sounded so weak
Invalid
I was tired
Tired of work
Tired when I got home
I had more work to do
I couldn't write
I had no energy
I cried
Exhausted

"Count to ten"
No
Not ten

"I'm going to slap your breasts"
Not the pain
One
My fists pounded the bed
Two
Pain
Hard pain
Three
Writhing
Make it stop
Please

"Now the nipple"
Four
Crying
Sobbing
Five

"Good girl
Now the other one"
No
Please
Stop
Six
Your sweat dripped on my tits
As the paint stirrer hit
Seven
I cried
Make it stop
Please
Eight
You paused
Eight
Eight
Eight
Eight
Over and over
I said eight

"Yes
I heard you"
Hard
Slap
On
The
Nipple
Tears
Streaming down my face
Hot tears
Nine
I whispered
Nine
Nine

"Yes nine"
As you slapped
My nipple
I cried
My face buried
In your balls

"Rub your pussy
Come
I'll give you Ten
When you come
Do you want just one or more"
Just one
I want Number Ten
Only Number Ten
My hands
Eager for my pussy
Wet
Rubbed
Hard
My back arching
Please
I want to come
Now
So close
Rubbing
My pussy swollen
My mouth eager for your cock
Please
So close
Yes
Now
Ten
The slap
Hard
Multiple slaps
Hard
Pain
Pleasure
I want you
Now
In my mouth
My hands searching for you
You took off the wrist cuffs
Your cock
Dripping
Down
My
Cheek
Hungrily
I lapped at your balls
Turning my head
Your cock
Deep in my throat
Pounding my face
You tasted so good
Hard
Throbbing
I want your juices
Please
Come for me
Now
Your fingers
Pinching my nipples
As your cock
Thrust inside my mouth
Your juices
Draining from your body
Down my throat
Pleasure
Pain
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