All Comments on 'crossroads'

by SpringBreezes

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Vivid, imaginative and to the point at the same time.

HarryHillHarryHillabout 10 years ago
this poem showed on the Pobo sticky

nice

Oldbear63Oldbear63about 10 years ago
This is beautiful.

It is amazing to me how sometimes the world around us can reflect our mood or thoughts and actually enhance and clarify them for us and you described that perfectly.

I am, for the most part, a poetic hacker but when I do produce something worthwhile it is usually a poem that tries to capture that intersection. You did it beautifully.

SpringBreezesSpringBreezesabout 10 years agoAuthor
Pobo Sticky?

I was surprised to read this poem appeared elsewhere, and needed to google the reference to "Pobo Sticky", discovering another poet. I assure you, I wrote this poem from my own experience last Sunday, and had not read another poem of a similar nature previously.

CleardaynowCleardaynowabout 10 years ago
Pobo Sticky

I think Harry Hill was refering to the fact that someone (Todski) recommended this poem in the New Poetry Recommendations 'Sticky' (Go to Bulletin Board at the top of the 'Stories and Pics' page then 4th down Poetry Feedback and Discussion & then New Poetry Recommendations).

There on the last page (7) it is. Why it is called a Sticky I have no idea & why Todski called it Pobo I do not know. The only reason I am saying all this rather than leaving it to Harry or Todski is that it could be less embarassing for everyone concerned coming from someone else (eg me)

Nice poem by the way. I liked it.

todski28todski28about 10 years ago
My lit accnt was being wierd the other day

I put a link to your poem in the poetry feedback and discussion thread and left s comment. The comment dissapeared as a lot of my comments have of late. Pobo is an abbreviation of poetry board. There is a poetry forum here with challenges, chat as well as inspiration and other poets.

http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=25

Copy and paste this into you browser and it should take you there. I sent you an e-mail to let you know as well :-)

There was no malicious intent or accusation here just my thoughts that every one should read this. Greenmountaineer also put in a recommend for laced in sad ribbons.

todski28todski28about 10 years ago

I put a link to your poem in the poetry feedback and discussion thread and left s comment. The comment dissapeared as a lot of my comments have of late. Pobo is an abbreviation of poetry board. There is a poetry forum here with challenges, chat as well as inspiration and other poets.

http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=25

Copy and paste this into you browser and it should take you there. I sent you an e-mail to let you know as well :-)

There was no malicious intent or accusation here just my thoughts that every one should read this. Greenmountaineer also put in a recommend for laced in sad ribbons.

todski28todski28about 10 years ago
Wrong place use this link

http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=25

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