All Comments on 'Crushed'

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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If you don't know what sweetmeat is, you'll miss much of what's said here. Ouch!

since i've seen anything from you. i can feel this all the way in rubbing up against my bones to a chill......nicely done.....don

I loved this sad lil poem~!!

Reaches out, grabbs ya.

Sends ya whirling into the land of the damned~

Imagery is the key here.

So much is said in painting, each stroke of the bitter brush.

Excellent~!!

Very deep ... emotional

More Please~!!

A fabulous read!

Thanks.

~ Jenn

i echo what ange said in her pc. "excellent, but bitter"

good to see some write from you again.

but bitter. I'm thinking of you. xo, Ange

wow, didn't realize how much I missed your poetry till I read this, more please, and glad to see ya back

very effective word choice, surprising sending! Simply super!