All Comments on 'Crushing'

for your pain but thankful you captured it so well.

" brine seering like fire'

is a great line

Thank you for this

It was a hard experience, but I did feel better after I wrote this. Thank you very much for your feedback. :)

Don't cry because it's 'Over',,,, Smile,,, because "It" 'Happened'!!!!!

The worst day of love, is eclipsed by the BEST day of Love.

You get up and do it AGAIN!!! Cuz it feels SO good!!

This was very sad but you made it through, didn't you? The images were greatly done and I really felt the pain. I'm sure so many at one time can relate to this piece. Thanks for the read, Dana

Seering is a good word as used here to detail a love gone.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.

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