All Comments on 'Dark Deeds'

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
sizzled

like a sultry night this lay across my mind like damp inthe heat, I am wet now <grin> Nice write...Art!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Grasping, groping, feeling;

you have a way with words,

turning black on white

fiery red with longing...

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Yummmmmm ~!!

VaVa Va Voooomm ~!! * Winks *

You pack a punch here lil lady ~!!

Love the imagery. Visuals

just poppin into my head

and makin me Hottt all over. ~!!

I would have trimmed it a lil,

but it still smokes ~!!

More Plez ~!!

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