All Comments on 'Dark Loneliness'

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
Dark lonliness~

a void?

I liked this line~

Lonely and dark,

No longer will be,

The voice from within,

Allows me to see.

witty wording~

LilDarlinLilDarlinover 19 years ago
See the light~

Yes this one is a lil dark an lonley. Except I do see the light near the end. I just loved the imagery here and the hope you have shown us. A great poem sadness, lonliness.

Yet still a light glowing dim, but Glowing.. Wonderful~~!!

More Please~~!

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