dark secrets

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fawnie
fawnie
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time whistles
content with her musings,
moments well spent
climbing sapphire hills.

crystal gazing,
soaring,
with violet wing,
and her violet cast shadow,
the purple hawk's view.

though seeing great distance,
the visible violet
of mountains majestic,
still hidden,
in the dark plum adventures
of life's night edition.

with purple moon rising.
time trembles,
in purple hearts,
unforgotten,
scarlet
dark secrets.

fawnie
fawnie
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WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
very nice

and the better the poem, the pickier I get. :)

with violet wing,

and her violet cast shadow,

I'm not sure using violet twice here works.

lostandfounderlostandfounderalmost 20 years ago
paint another picture

I like the way you used the words as brush strokes. It give a dark and moody feel to this poem. Good sense of shadow and form. Nice work!

doormousedoormousealmost 20 years ago
Excellent

Damn girl!!!!

You have some talent!!!! ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Nice.....

....contribution to the "Purple Challenge". I like the way fawnie weaves the various shades into her work. Nicely done.

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