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by fawnie

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Nice.....

....contribution to the "Purple Challenge". I like the way fawnie weaves the various shades into her work. Nicely done.

doormousedoormousealmost 20 years ago
Excellent

Damn girl!!!!

You have some talent!!!! ;-)

lostandfounderlostandfounderalmost 20 years ago
paint another picture

I like the way you used the words as brush strokes. It give a dark and moody feel to this poem. Good sense of shadow and form. Nice work!

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
very nice

and the better the poem, the pickier I get. :)

with violet wing,

and her violet cast shadow,

I'm not sure using violet twice here works.

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