by sandyb
I like this poem. Nice tense pacing. A good obvious use of meter either instinctive or deliberate. A clever poem with great imagery.
Agree with both comments above; however, can't quite grasp "warrior's plow."
from my favourite poet. Lovely imagery, an instant access to a stunning word picture. Ty. (one tiny error--it should be "secrete" not "secret")
especially this line -
and
sleeps without dreaming, and
dreams without sleep