All Comments on 'david'

This poem was mention in the New Poems Review in the Poetry Forum today. (50% thermometer rating is to avoid altering your voting scores) Please feel free to come along to the Poetry Forum.

Heartily concur with today's review, recommending readers read all you've done to date. Very good work. But on <I>david</I>, what happened? There's inplaces that should be two words, radaint that should be radiant, and, bouyant that should be buoyant. Do an EDIT and it'll be just fine.

beautiful words and metaphors, make for a colorful poem.