All Comments on 'Dearest Master'

A fine little D/s piece. My only suggestion is on these lines:<P>

<Br>Surrendering myself

<Br>To the One I belong to.<P>

You might try something like:<P>

<Br>I surrender myself

<Br>To the One to whom I belong.<P>

You could even drop the 'myself' in this case as it seems a bit repetitious.

The first letters of each line, spell down the title of the poem. I've requested that literotica bold the letters as was stated to do in the original submission and they still haven't. So for those who want to know... take a look again.

-=petstorm=-