All Comments on 'Definition: Sanjib'

That's all I could hear.

Great work

great phrasing

A glimpse of the Raj

Thank you

"drives better

than he dances"

As usual, you have a wonderful way with descriptive detail.

Wonderful character observations, and beautifully expressed.

That old poem, dark south carolina or whatever, of mine doesn't need an E. It kind of bites. lol But this is wonderful!!!

I must read this stanza again:

Sanjib draws houses

combs his hair to the left

drives better

than he dances

likes Brodsky and Peanuts

and real English tea

Do you realize how good your poem is?

Sounds like a charming bloke, unaware of the charm he exudes.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.

----------