All Comments on 'Desire'

by Joseki Ko

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jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Yes...

this one worked pretty well.

"the dance of unfulfillment" seemed a good juxtaposition with the "the look in her eyes". Pretty good. Audio quality, though abrupt at the start worked pretty well too.

jim :)

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Wants and needs so simply revealed.

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