All Comments on 'Desire Discovered'

by Remec

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annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
:)

ah hyou ask the question then get all hot and sensual your forgot to answer?

did you? did you?

:) I know, it is a poem, it is not supposed to answer

nova4unova4uover 19 years ago
Only one thing to say...

Beautiful, Remec. Simply beautiful.

Honey123Honey123over 19 years ago
Lovely

We have all been there. You have put into words those incredible feelings one gets for an "on-line" lover. It does leave me wondering if things worked out...I can only hope!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Reflecting

Beautifully written.There is nothing like that moment when after so long there is a person to go with the words on the screen. your eyes finally meet and you embrace,hands wander.........

LadyJeanneLadyJeanneabout 19 years ago
Incredible!

Fantastic story telling in a straightforward style. You've woven passion, discovery, wonder and plain old hot sex into a beautifully detailed and longing piece. Wonderful, just wonderful. Thank you for sharing this with us. LJ

angelicminxangelicminxabout 17 years ago
Captured

The essence of an online love affair. Beautiful, well written poem, Remec. Vetted. ~Minx

impressiveimpressiveover 16 years ago
Beautiful!

But I expected no less. ~ Imp

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