All Comments on 'Desperate Words'

Loved your choice of words

in this piece, really hit

the spot!

Thanks.

~ J

contrasts in this.

"majesty to mockery;"

was my favorite one...

I really wanted to like this but, at the end, felt somewhat disappointed. I kept expecting some clear conclusion, rather than endless waffling. To me, it felt more like a writing exercise than a poetical expression.

Still, keep writing, and keep posting! That's why we're all here.