by Miss Oatlash
what an lovely sense of humor!! very nice Miss O
no thermothingie here ;)
Good rhythm and timing, probably took longer to write than it would first appear. Nice work. Not quite a 100, but I fear to give it any less. :)
he said rather meekly, in one voice, in another:
Somehow I expected more of you
like whipping the shit out of the critics
Instead of taking the cowards way out
Perhaps, with a little more...
Oh, never mind, go to bed 1201, dream about the horses again
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